The Cheshire Cat

I didn't really find any grammar mistakes, but I was a little confused at the beginning as i read on I didn't really understand why you mentioned Blithe at the ...

Thank you all very much. Yes, I've read lots from Lemony Snicket. In fact, he was really the one who made me want to write. His books were funny, suspenseful, ...

Now that I read it over, you're very much correct, I don't need the (...) Thanks for the input! Weeeell I really don't want to give anything away about the ...

Anijumper -- Thanks for the feedback! I changed what you suggested, but instead of 'story' I did 'narritive', only because I already used the world 'story' around 10 words prior ...

Thanks Everyone, for all the great comments! Kaylyn - Thanks for the feedback. I stuck the period in there and I'll fix the 'OMG' thing. The one thing I disagree ...

Kaylyn: To answer your question, I am still in the process of writing (currently in the middle of chapter three). I write as I am inspired (which is often, thank ...

Maki-chan: The term 'Imprinted' will be described in the next chapter. :3 *mwa ha ha ha* Glad that you thought my writing was enjoyable. :D It makes me really happy ...

Excellent job, I'm dying for more. I can't think of any crutique for you, but I'd love if you could PM me when you add more chapters! Sorry for the ...

Thank you all so much for the feedback! I've changed those spelling mistakes - thanks for pointing them out to me. I was having a lot of trouble with 'earge' ...